I love this poem, I really think it is very good, and not the fact that it came from the heart but because you have a simialr style writing to me. No rythming....just repeating some lines and stuff to give it more depth....One problem though, change those Iâ?? stuff up makes it hard to read and degrades ur brillant work...

=] i like it..

I LIKE YOUR POEM I KNOW HOW IT FEELS