by Hidden Feelings within these Words Jun 13, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I feel so confined within these invisible chains. |
For such a sad poem , still I felt a sence of victory. Keep up the fight and please keep writing. Lots of emotion with an exelent flow. I would be proud to have written this one 5/5 |
by Robert
You talk alot about the invisable chains but never really let the reader know what and how these chains came about, I think if you gave abit more background on the chains this would be a better write. Plot121 |