Beauty within

Aw this made me smile. An excellent piece that I'm sure speaks to millions of girls. I know it spoke to me. This was a great topic to write about and the words you chose really worked! Wonderful! [= 5/5

I love the fact that this was such a short poem and yet you managed to put so much meaning behind just 8 lines of poetry. Very well done! 5/5

This was a nice simple poem. I liked it. it had this mysterious my suggestion is right a poem just like this but go into greater detail why does this person have bruises why do they feel so ugly you know just go with this poem and make something even more amazing 4/5
kaila

I think at the end it should be "forget" or "be forgotten" it was really good poem, and it is also very true, people need to look within to see the true beauty, beauty is only skin deep. 5/5

Stephanie Naylor

I think the ending almost didn't work. Forgot really should be forgotten and for the sake of rhyming it almost didn't work. But it doesn't sound so off that no one would enjoy reading it. Although short, this poem is still beautifully written. <3