I for one can totally relate to this poem. Great work. 5/5

Wow i thought that was amazing! it's so hard to rhyme, let alone do it in an acrostic poem. it's really difficult to make an acrostic poem unique, but you mastered it, congrats. beautiful

Aweh, that is probably one of the best acrostics I have ever read. And I mean that. :] . Damn you, this is in the same contest trhat I'm in, setting the bar high are ya? Lol.

"Every time i think back of how she could be my wife."

^^ Capitalize the I, hun.

"Ever time I think its over, my heart then remembers,"

^^ 'ever' to 'every'

Shouldn't have helped ya out like that so I'd have a better chance at winning, but what can I say; I'm not a poor sport and plus ily. Lol.

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Aweh, that is probably one of the best acrostics I have ever read. And I mean that. :] . Damn you, this is in the same contest trhat I'm in, setting the bar high are ya? Lol.

"Every time i think back of how she could be my wife."

^^ Capitalize the I, hun.

"Ever time I think its over, my heart then remembers,"

^^ 'ever' to 'every'

Shouldn't have helped ya out like that so I'd have a better chance at winning, but what can I say; I'm not a poor sport and plus ily. Lol.

5.5
<3

I loved this poem Bryan. It was portrayed with such emotion which was beautiful and so heartfelt. Really capturing. I loved how this ryhmed I really don't read too many Acrostic poems that ryhme which was really great. Yet again you have pulled off an excellent poem. Loved it 5/5~mel

Wow great acrostic and long word for it fantastic job 5/5

Bryan
Great Acrostic :) Love the title. I have not tried this yet. You make it look so easy. I know how hard the poetry forms are. Excellent job. Imagery and word choices awesome.
Take care Cindy

Love this beautiful poem.

Thats awesome very touching

Beautiful written.
Very touching.
Loved it.

Beautiful poem!