Thunder Acoustic

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Jun 14, 2007


Talk is cheap; but baby I'm a sucker for sweet talk,
But I never learned to run away; I was taught to walk,
So I don't know how I look tonight; in this summer dress,
Running away from you; tears streaking my distress.

My Mama gave me these heels; taught me manners,
And never before have I been scared of wedding planners,
But the way you smelled earlier; the look in your eyes,
I knew in the back of my mind; I skipped over your lies.

So the only wedding I know is playing all night on ABC,
And My Big Fat Greek Wedding* is good enough for me;
As long as I've got Mr. Daniels for comfort; I'll be fine,
Because the whiskey is far better than cheap wine.

So maybe I don't need to tie the knot; I can stay gone,
This cheap motel will occupy my mind until dawn,
And if I change my mind by then; will you have changed?
Will the flowers I picked for the reception be rearranged?

You played me that song; it scared me half to death,
And I could smell her with the nicotine on your breath,
But you lied; covered up all of your pathetic tracks,
So if there was one thing you missed; it was the facts.

The fact of the matter is; you forgot to wash your clothes,
There was white cocaine dabbled under your nose,
And all along; I listened to the tattered words you said,
But if it were up to me; I'd choose the thunder acoustic instead.

-Jenna Elphick
June 13, 2007

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*Big Fat Greek Wedding - for those who don't know, is a movie.

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  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Beautiful dear... I had to read this because the title reminded me of Boys Like Girls... but this was just freaking amazing! I can't find anything wrong with it, like Bry said. 10000/5 if I could love.

    <33
    Ciao

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    The idea of thunder acoustic sounds fimaliar to me, but i can't remember why. whered you get the idea from? and nice allusions you put into your poems. you tell something inetersting stories.

    sorry if my comments sound so jumbled or something along those lines.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    I am yet to watch the movie, but this is very good, i tried to find some mistakes but its perfect with a perfect flow so i give it a 5/5!!! and thanx for the comments!! keep these materpieces coming!!!