Untitled

by Elapsed   Jun 14, 2007


When will it be released?
Taken from me and kept captive.

Where will I find my peace?
Lost from me but not forgotten.

Who will course this pain to cease?
Sorrow from my past seems to linger.

What will become of me?
Take from my mind this anguish.

Am I to be kept captive, forever forgotten to be filled with lingering anguish

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I'm not to sure what to think about this. It sort of just popped out lol. Please feel free to comment honestly. Thank you:)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    This is great i like poems that make you think about what ur feeling......hey i have a poem called untitled too but its somewhat different ne ways good write

    -laura-

  • 17 years ago

    by amandalynn

    This is realli a good poem. i like it. 5/5..also thanx for ur comment on my poem..
    manda

  • 17 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Comment honestly huh? The flow was a little rough in places but other then that it was great =) I really liked it just like all your others ^_^
    You really are one of the most talented beginning writer I know lols Keep it up and please keep them coming =)
    Rhea

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