Comment honestly huh? The flow was a little rough in places but other then that it was great =) I really liked it just like all your others ^_^
You really are one of the most talented beginning writer I know lols Keep it up and please keep them coming =)
Rhea

This is realli a good poem. i like it. 5/5..also thanx for ur comment on my poem..
manda

This is great i like poems that make you think about what ur feeling......hey i have a poem called untitled too but its somewhat different ne ways good write

-laura-