Now your body has given up
your to skinny to live
at only 34.5 kg
your body had nothing left to give

It really sickens me the amount of people that we lose to eating disorders. There should be no reason for a girl to feel that she is fat. This poem has brought tears to my eyes. Im so sorry if this poem is true. All the best.

This was a sad poem and i think you have done well in keeping the reader interested.
the descriptive wording that you have used is very good and you have talent.