Conveyance (Acrotheree)

by Fsams   Jun 14, 2007


Can
One live
Never mournful?
Vows now broken
Everything is taken
Yet no love within me
Ask me not how could this be
Nothing is left, no hopes of love
Can't understand she took back her love
Everlasting conveyance of her true love

Written by Fsams
13/60/2007
Wednesday 15:20

* The word "Acrotheree" is a blend from the words Acrostic and Etheree. I gave this name because the poem is both an Etheree as well as an Acrostic.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    Short and sweet, loved the new form. Its totally new to me. Tc

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I think that the last two lines in this poem really stood out to me, i found soul in this it was good xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    First off, nice use of a new invented from. It works well.
    Second off, nice use of emotions.
    Third off, nice use of description.
    Overall I really enjoyed this, it's one of your better pieces.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    So talented about mixing this two poetry forms together..It was so wonderful and I liked this poetry form and topic
    Keep it up,
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I really loved the style it was different and unique i've been studying poetry for many years and have no come across this one as of yet so this was great. Ethrees are my favorite style short and simple but adding the acrostic in was great. I think these would be difficult to write but you pulled this off nicely. Outstanding. Well done

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