I really liked this one =) I totally relate to it and the pain and sadness behind it =P A great job 5/5 =D
Rhea

Wow great. NIc two in one piece. Acrotheree??? Wow nice name. Beautiful rhymes and wordings. well penned indeed.

Nice =) As a Dutch girl I had a hard time understanding it, but once I understood, it was beautiful. ^^

Wow That was intresting and diffrent. I rather liked it. The emtion was strong , the flow was great, the word choice was excellent, again my friend you have done another brillant job 5/5

Hmm its good..i didnt really understand it but thats probably just because im blonde:P lol
but i like the word use it sounds really good..
<3

In both stanza and form it was great, I think you made this piece organized and disiplined, I often had problems with this so much emphisis on form and structure often left the message or passion a step behind. Still a good poem none the less Plot121

This an outstanding piece from you. I liked your ideas of combining two varieties.

I liked this one, but Rain was better, if you ask me. The ending was odd, because all of the lines ended with the same word. But I love Etherees so much, just the way they sound. 4/5

I really loved the style it was different and unique i've been studying poetry for many years and have no come across this one as of yet so this was great. Ethrees are my favorite style short and simple but adding the acrostic in was great. I think these would be difficult to write but you pulled this off nicely. Outstanding. Well done

So talented about mixing this two poetry forms together..It was so wonderful and I liked this poetry form and topic
Keep it up,
Laura

First off, nice use of a new invented from. It works well.
Second off, nice use of emotions.
Third off, nice use of description.
Overall I really enjoyed this, it's one of your better pieces.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

I think that the last two lines in this poem really stood out to me, i found soul in this it was good xxx alex xxx

Short and sweet, loved the new form. Its totally new to me. Tc