Comments : Grey Future

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    "Doubt loves to play
    With a tortured souls heart"

    GREAT LINES!!!! Amazing wording! This poem was just perfect. I mean...okay...we all see to many poems with the same old message and the same ways of describing heartache so it was nice to see this well-flowing, and rhyming poem with neat imagery!
    Charisma*