Excellent poem, great flow, vocabulary was good and you just did an awesome job,the sad part of it is, how did you know about my life, great write, thanks for sharing, your friend Tracy dean 5/5 |
I see your feelings show and that it's captivated me and put me in a corner myself. |
Love it hunni |
by Fan Angeleo
"I'm lost in myself" I felt your emotions in those few words and that touch me, beautiful poem keep on writing. |