I loved this. I like how you used the cards has a symbol type thing. I didn't quite understand it until the end.

"You've got your poker face on...how cute.
But the fear is coming out of your pores.
I lost all doubts long ago. Now's the time.
Win or lose, an ending's what I'm looking for."

That was my favorite part of the poem. It made the poem for me.

5/5.

A great concept. Finally, a love poem with a unique style.

Brad

P.S. Thanks for your comment on my poem 'Pieces of the mood are falling'.

Comment #8:

This is definately my favorite stanza-
You could pick them up and be surprised
To find that we're the perfect pair
But my chances of happily ever after
Have never been all that fair.-
That was an exellent way to show the odds of being the perfect match. Amazing job!
~Midnight Sun

"You've got your poker face on...how cute.
But the fear is coming out of your pores."

That couplet tickled me.. i don't know why, it just sounded so sweet, lol

This whole poem Charisma, is a work of art.
I loved the whole concept of a card game. It's my favourite metaphor for love
Excellent =)
5/5
*Gem*