Awww....Ang. what a powerful write!! This piece brought tears to my eyes. Very heartfelt and moving.

Aaah, this is heartbreaking. Beautifully written though with a really nice flow...

Very beautiful poem with strong lexis used and well adhered to the Rictameter rules. I like the way you have expressed the poem. Tc

This poem is so touching and deep, also excellently written. You have great poetical skills.
The ending is very effective.
5/5 from me

Great poem. It is emotional and so sad. Very touching piece you said so much with a just few words. I am impressed!
Well done...