by Natalie84 Jun 14, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Fear pierced my heart |
I like the way you write |
Excellent poem, and very well written, good flow and wording was great, wonderful poem to read , sad , sorry ,hope things get better for you, great job, your friend Tracy dean 5/5 |
by Angie
Oh Girl, this one breaks my heart, I can so relate to it. I felt this way at one time, but you really gotta try to put the past to rest, I know easier said than done, but I did it and found a love thats rare and true. I hope you can too. Its hard to fight those demons, but keep writing and keep talking about it, get it all out and then try again. Don't be afraid of it.... go after it, you deserve to be happy and free of the past. A very heartfelt write.... love ya girl. |
I love this poem. great poem! 5/5! please read some of my poems. thanks! anyways great poem because I can feel the same. |