Aw, that was really sweet and pretty. 5/5

~*Alex*~

Nice and caring.

Peace x X x

That's dignified and sweet but still vulnerable and a little cocky. It's not to condisending though. It's an enjoyable poem. Well done.
Please will you take a look at In Iraq On Family...I'm asking a few people because I don't really know if I like it and it's the first piece I've written in a while.
Thanks for your time.
Poppet

I try to heal your pain
Take it away
But its persistence keeps nagging...nagging through your wall that decays

*can u edith these one*

"But its persistence keeps nagging...nagging through your wall that decays"

acctually its ok... but can you just enther for the next batch... ty