This could almost be considered a dark write as it left shivers down my spine. I don't know why.

The flow was very good, and message was clear.

Well done.

Always,
Jeannie

"Dignity for dollars and a raunchy stage name
Is all she has for fifteen minutes of fame"

I've heard and seen alot of things and I just question myself. Why do girls feel it is okay to degrade themselves? We should all learn how to have more self pride for ourselves, and some dignity too. Great views in this poem.

Take Care.

WOW that was a totally awesome poem, vocabulary was excellent and well written , flow was lovely and you got the point across very clear, great job . keep it up your friend Tracy dean 5/5

Great poem, every stanza is excellently written.
Good job on this one, I love your work.
5/5