Great poem. It has an emotion that flows through it. I really enjoyed this poem alot. 5/5 .... Keep writting from the heart.

Chan
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Wow, this is really good. I liked this one alone, it had alot more flow than some of the others and your word usage was amazing.
I liked how you ended this poem, it has a certain twist to it. I like it, you are really good at writing dark poetry.
:) keep it upp kk!!

-alissa

This poem is full with amazing felling of darkness. Wording is great and rhyming is very unique. Atmosphere is really incredible.
Well done 5/5