Happy Father's Day

by Jackie Marie   Jun 14, 2007


*It's not that great. I wrote it more out of anger than anything.*

What a wonderful day
A day to celebrate with joy and cheer
Once again, it's Father's Day
Go ahead, drink another beer

I should be happy for you, dad
It's a day just for you
To tell you the truth, I couldn't care less
I hate you and everything you do

You have never been a father to me
You act as if I was a mistake
Sorry, Dad, you helped bring me here
That wasn't my choice to make

You always call me names
You tell me that I am not yours
You hate when I say "I love you Dad"
So I'm not even going to say it anymore

You don't deserve my love.
You don't deserve me
I am not a bad person
But you don't take the time to see

You are a piece-of-[crap] father
I don't even know why I try.
You have never cared about me.
You probably wouldn't even notice if I died

You use to get my hopes up high.
Then you'd shoot them straight to hell.
What I have ever done to you,
Is something you refuse to tell.

I now give you the best father award.
You are best at hurting me.
You are best at not caring at all.
You are best at just leaving me be.

I no longer will cry over you.
You are not worth my tears.
You not loving me,
Used to be one of my biggest fears.

So you're right, you are NOT my father,
Nor will you ever be.
So here is the worst father award,
Given straight to you from me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by bacha

    Gooooooood very good:):))

    iloved it for sure:):)

    keep it up:))))

    khuloodan:)
    smile all the time:)

  • 17 years ago

    by hani

    Hi
    very nice and beautiful poem 5/5 .
    and i'll appreciate your vote and comment for my poems
    hani

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww this was sad,, i liked it ,, 5/5
    Janaynay
    P.S. Im sorry

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I understand your anger and your hate for him...And you reflected those so well on this
    You're not alone and just don't worry as you say you don't
    Life is too short to worry
    Take care,
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, very interesting. I could feel the emotions in that poem and i thought that was very good. Although i saw where a change could be made, and it was in this verse.

    I now give you the best father award.
    You are best at hurting me.
    You are best at not caring at all.
    You are best at just leaving me be.

    Instead of reaeating 'you are best' three times, i think it would sound better if you drop the 'you are' in the third and fourth line, so it would sound like this;

    I now give you the best father award.
    You are best at hurting me.
    Best at not caring at all.
    Best at just leaving me be.

    Hope i helped.
    Wallace.

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