How sad. Did this really happen to you?So intense.And if this did happen..I am truly sorry.....things happen ..I never understand ..sad

Amazing! i love the almost calm way this poem is read, that slows it right down. the rhymes seem to me to almost stumble into each other, and the feelings in the last half of the poem, are exaggerated through this technique! its really really good :) xx

I saw this in the contest forum and thought it was a great title! I am so excited you chose to do it, seeing as your one of my favorite poets. As always, you did an amazing job, but much better than usual I must say. I especially loved these lines,
"The reflection of tears that are seen in my eyes
Is the pain of a heartache that lives in your lies."

Those were well worded and really hit the point!
Great job! 5/5
Charisma*

Jeannie
You have really written an excellent piece here. Imagery and word choices great. The sadness and dispair pour from every line.

Great job!
Love Cindy