I think this is one of your best writes, a lot of your poems are great but this one has something special, the wording is perfect! Really Really Really GOOD! #5 Excellent+

I really do like this one of yours! Still I can see the pictures of it ticking round my mind as I read it, this one has sooo much feeling in it. Like someone has just pulled it out of a life and put it to paper. just so amazing! great work. Your friend, Lucy

Wow, another great poem of you. It is different but i like it.

This one is so touching and emotional, amazingly written. I adore your work, Tracy, it always makes me think about the world we're living in.
Great choice of words. 5/5

Tracy
Very deep and dark feelings come from your words. Excellent job!

Take care Cindy

Still cant get my head round children living like this. It is so wrong that its unthinkable. This is a very touching poem, highlights the helplessness!

Kelly
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