Wow, amazing!! i love the flow. great write hun. 5/5

Really good poem...5/5. my favorite part is "My heart screams want, as my mind says no,
Yet some how, some way, I cant seem to let go."
keep up the writing:)
-Elizabeth

Great poem, I can relate to it, I had that kind of thoughts...
5/5

Wow that was amazing too! you are sooo much better than me!5/5