by Ed or Ian Henderson Jun 14, 2007
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
The Churches are empty this Sunday |
by Kelly
Well you have certainly have a different way of looking at things and there is a great deal of truth in it, love it, love how you focus on how we are all addicted to spending in a greedy little world. I really enjoyed this. |
I love the store/religion metaphor. The play on the line 'sale now on' and "sail on, now' is clever. This is well written and has a good message to it. Great piece. |
by S0u10fS0rr0w
Tis a very good poem ed, flows good for a nonrhyme poem, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!! |