Tis a very good poem ed, flows good for a nonrhyme poem, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

I love the store/religion metaphor. The play on the line 'sale now on' and "sail on, now' is clever. This is well written and has a good message to it. Great piece.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Well you have certainly have a different way of looking at things and there is a great deal of truth in it, love it, love how you focus on how we are all addicted to spending in a greedy little world. I really enjoyed this.

Kelly
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