Wow...thats just...breathtaking. nothing more i can say without crying:)

This was an amazing poem, i must say. it was very into depth as well as capturative. great job 5/5.

Jeese! That's amazing! 5/5

This is a beautifully written sonnet, and you chose to make it so that everything you felt was out there...which makes it really personable..i love the "twenty and two", and how you went back to it in the last stanza, you're an amazing writer, keep it up