Comments : Prototype

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "So she stands on the runway; wearing barely nothing at all,
    But it looks to me like Ms. Richie has finally taken the fall."

    I must admit its unfair to condemn celebrities when they begin to make mistakes, I think we forget that they are also human. But your right she has gone too far, what they should do is take her out of magazines so young girls wont want to aspire to be like her, until she gets her act together and gets her feet back on the ground. Great poem though glad you could express this.

    Take Care.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    That was unexpected, but you did a great job with your poem. Out of all of the ones I've read today, this one is my favorite.