by Alex Jun 14, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Love is a broken sight, and if it can't be perfect nothings right. |
by Jenni Marie
Oh my... |
by ECILA ice
Woooooowww!!!! i really like this one it's so sweet, really sweet indeed!!! i loved how u put all the words in ech lines and stanzas, and the meaning too!! EXCELLENT WORK KEEP IT UP! |
by Cyma Khan
That was really nice n so true.... |
This poem really has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. I must say I am impressed with your pure and cute description of romantic love. The poem also reflects the mischief of cupid. 5/5 |
by Jackie Marie
This poem, I love it. When I read it, it kept reminding me of the new relationship I am in. It is a well-written piece. It really is. Good job hun. |