by Cody r Jun 14, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
My mom's old boss, i new him well |
by Melpomene
This poem was some what different. I liked the short poem but I felt this lacked emotion in some places. The dedication was good yet to me this didnt seem sad because the emotion wasnt that felt. I think with a little work this poem could be pretty good. ~mel |