No more tears

by evil   Jun 14, 2007


Why must you make me cry all the time?
torturing me so painfully
but i have one thing to say to you
goodbye you will never have to see
me or my tears again, i hope you live a great life without me.
As i take the blade and push it to my
throat not able to breathe nor speak..
just........bleed

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  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Ur poems are very powerful and i have noticed that and i love ur work..you just need to keep working. you have a TON of power in ur poems. use it to the BEST of ur advantage. kep writing and ill keep reading. but u would have 2 tell me when u write another one!

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Ur poems are very powerful and i have noticed that and i love ur work..you just need to keep working. you have a TON of power in ur poems. use it to the BEST of ur advantage. kep writing and ill keep reading. but u would have 2 tell me when u write another one!

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    Wow, you could really feel the emotion that you put in this poem. Great job! I agree with a previous commenter, this is very powerful!
    Keep it up, 5/5!

    With all due respect,
    Hatori
    The Illusionist

  • 17 years ago

    by Numb Handed

    Powerful stuff

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem, feel the pain,hurt and anger in this , great write ,your friend Tracy dean 5/5

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