Great poem, feel the pain,hurt and anger in this , great write ,your friend Tracy dean 5/5

Powerful stuff

Wow, you could really feel the emotion that you put in this poem. Great job! I agree with a previous commenter, this is very powerful!
Keep it up, 5/5!

With all due respect,
Hatori
The Illusionist

Ur poems are very powerful and i have noticed that and i love ur work..you just need to keep working. you have a TON of power in ur poems. use it to the BEST of ur advantage. kep writing and ill keep reading. but u would have 2 tell me when u write another one!

Ur poems are very powerful and i have noticed that and i love ur work..you just need to keep working. you have a TON of power in ur poems. use it to the BEST of ur advantage. kep writing and ill keep reading. but u would have 2 tell me when u write another one!