LOST

by anier   Jun 14, 2007


I am lost
Nowhere to be found
Nobody's home
Seeking if someones around

Walking outside the street
Keep walking by my bare feet
Don't know where to travel on this road
Theres no plan which way to go

Travel on this web of life
Don't know which way is right
Puzzled in clues you've given me
And make me realize its not easy

No one is around
My face down and pout
I'm thinking way too loud
I want to scream and shout

Theres something I want to do
But theres something make me not to
Wherever you are and takes you
I'm right here waiting for someone I can hold on to.

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  • 17 years ago

    by anier

    Tnx mel for the comment..well, im not really good in haiku or doing things in measure..if i just feel right to write a poem i wrote it..tnx again ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was quite interesting. The emotion you portrayed was really good. The structure seemed a little odd to me I liked how there was 5 stanzas of 4 lines but some lines seemed shorter then others and others seemed longer which in some places through the flow off. Other then that I did enjoy reading this. Well done~mel