by MorbidCupcake Jun 14, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
She is always running |
by Melpomene
For a topic which is some what cliche I think you did a good job with this. The flow seemed to be on task and you used simple words which were quite effective. The only thing that seemed to throw me off a little was the structure of this poem in other words your stanzas being of all different amount of lines. Other then that this was an emotion pact poem. Well done with this~mel |