First of the emotions portrayed in this poem were so strong and powerful really heartfelt. If this is a true poem I am sorry for your loss if not you actually made this seem real. One thing I suggest is that you capitalize the first letter of each line and capitalize the 'I's' It will make this poem much neater. Well done on this. Great effort~mel

Thanx.. sadly this is true.. but u dont have to be sorry today it has been 1 yr and neearly 1 monnth i guess the words are hard to comeout it dosent matter how long the pain never goes away ever thanx agian and thanx for the tip i might use it xoxox tata

Your poem is lovely, as you know i've lost my dad, its definately the hardest thing ever, i know exactly how you feel, its now 2 and a half years since my dad died and i've only jus plucked up the courage to put my poems for my dad on here. it does get easier but no matter how much time passes we'll never forget our perfect dads. x

Ur poem is vry good.. sad n deep.. full ov meaning.. ur dad wud b proud ov u
keep up the fab poemz
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