I LOVE THIS!!! I cannot comprehend why you have not had many comments on this. I loved the whole lets run away and just be together. Yeah I agree with Britt the whole Baby let's go to Vegas song is stuck in my head but this could easily be written into the song as forgotten verses. Fantastic Job,
Kay

Very nice.. I enjoied the emotion presented and the overall flow of this poem. keep it up.. 5/5

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