This poem is definitly the best I have read from you. You poetry keeps on getting better. The meaning portrayed behind this was great, strong and hearfelt. Robin well done a good effort 5/5 definitly~mel

Hey i love this one :D its really good hey if you ever have time come and see my poems i just started but i could use sum tips

you get 5\5

"Why is the question
that keeps plaguing our minds."

I like that couplet. Although it has a different interpretation, it reminds me of Deepak Chopra's questions concerning Life and so-on...

"Each of us want(s) to place blame some where,
that place really doesn't exist"

Once again, I like that couplet. Most of us, if not all, have the nature to try and put the blame on someone, or something imaginary. In truth, uncertainty defines reality...

"We mo(u)rn for the man he was"

It was a poignant write, nonetheless. I'll give you my props for writing such a fine piece. =] 5/5

Love,
Debbie Cakes

Tis a sad and true poem, it flows great for a nonrhyme poem, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

This is an awesome poem good job i think you did a excellent job on the flow and everything also thx for the comment

keenan

Very sad poem, the words and message your presenting to the readers flows nicely, looking forward to reading more sadness from you... Great work on this poem :^) doomed till death dungeonbat

Very good poem, very deep. I liked the questions you put in, it kinda draws the reader into it more. Great job keep it up.

Great poem, Flow was okay. I really like the theme in the poem! keep it up! and I love the title! 5/5!

It's nice... thoughtful poem... keep writing.

This a great read it made my heart sink it was so emotional

Very nice poem... a nice pice that describes reflections that many can relate to.. The ending is also satisfying....

=)

Wow, Robin this poem is so good!! XD
I likey this one! 5/5 and keep it up.. oh thanks for the two comments you sent on my poems. yours are way better. But I will be looking forward to reading more and more of your poems.

Our sincerest laughter
With some pain is fraught,
We look before and after,
And pine for what is not.

I have just changed the order of lines from Shelley to answer your querry. We can be happy if we live inthe present only.

Good poem