by Stumbling Shaman Jun 15, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Where shall my passion go |
Shorter than what I'm used to but said more in just a few lines than others do in a few stanzas. Like how it starts with a question and then it's kinda answered. Some nice words and overall I really liked the entire thing. It had something that was captivating about it Maybe its length added to its charm. Still it's definitely a cool write and to make it longer would defeat its effectiveness. |