My favourite lines:

but i admit, i am weak.
i cannot summon the strength to leave,
to find what i seek,
love and happiness, yet complete non-existence.

the last sentence was really well said. i could relate and really touched me inside.

5/5, your friend David

You showed some strong emotions in this one, it was excellent : )

Good ending, I like this one very much.
I'm thrilled, I'm adding you to my favorites list.

The flow seemed slightly off, but the words you chose to describe your topic really worked in this poem. I think that in this poem, the last stanza was also my favorite:

i do not know how to escape,
please, someone teach me how to run away,
maybe then some meaning will my life take shape,
i'll be sad to leave you all behind.

The third line in this stanza was really powerful. Keep it up, 5é5

Hari

This is an amazing poem.Congratulations,you're a young and talented writter.Keep on the good work and take good care of you.Best regards,Michelle XxX