Aaaw its awesome. nice work and nicely done.

you are such a talented writer thats why i will give you 5/5
take care

Jeannie,
Awestruck! The never ending questions we have about our existence. Was it all in vain?
I have and am sure everyone else has asked the same questions you ask. You have penned a marvelous write. Although, I do not have any answers to the questions I can tell you this....my belief is everything happens for a reason, it is our choice to learn or regret our mistakes......but even then will it all be worthwhile. This poem is definitely going in my favorites. Fantastic my friend. Simply fantastic.

Kay

Jeannie
What a awesome poem. Very intense and deep feelings portrayed.

No tender mercies
befall me as I seek knowledge
Hindered and broken
in the face of diversity
I once again pose
the question...

Did I live

This I am sure so many ask everyday.
Take care
love Cindy