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by Reminders Torture
This poem is so sad.i can relate to it very well. My tears trickle in the water, looking at the girl The girl is in peril, my heart bleeds for her I sought to help her but nothing I could do That evil face burned into my eyes, He came and beat the girl, she cries Wishing to be save from that evils hand He strikes her once, He strikes her twice He strikes the poor girl until shes down Another little angel inflicted with pain this stanza brought tears to my eyes. keep up the good work. 5/5 hope we stay in touch. best wishes take care
by Jemma
So sad, and well written. It was very moving. Keep writing.