I loved this one :):):)

very very good and you are a talented girl:):)

keep up girl:):):)

khuloodan:):)
smile all the time:)

Aww i loves this poem!!!
my heart goes out to u....it is alway hard to loose our first love....but just remembe shes always gunna be there for u and she looking over yu!!...just make sure u live ur life to the fullest for you and for HER!!

never stop feeling!! never stop writing!

bree tak care nowX

This is really good. its sad & it doesnt sound forced, sounds like it came from the heart.. 5/5 i love it <3