Probably the best acrostic i have read in my 15 years of life my 4 favorite lines were:
Sober smiles and fascinating looks- cute and fun
Delightful lies began so proud- thats the way lies often betray us
Dance with me until forever as it's my bid- sweet and sensitive yet a bold statement
Rewinding all your tears and let moon to be ours- one again a very cute and bold line and yet still some what beautiful

personally i loved it another piece worth 5/5

I like this poem however I have read better from you this is only my opinion but I dident feel this poem flowed very well also it would be good if you split this into four 4 line stanzas.

Great poem.
Flow; flawless
Rhyming; excellent
Writting; Very well done

I also loved how in the 2nd stanza the lines flowed into the next. Very effective. 5/5

-Shannon <3

Wow quite deep and I REALLY LOVE YOUR POETRY 5/5