Sunshine (Etheree Form)

by PoeticVixen   Jun 15, 2007


Bright
Golden
Sunshine rays
Heat beaming down
Fiercely hot at noon
Enveloping the air
Breathing life into nature
That survives off the warmth of light
Until morning when you will rise again

- my first ever attmept at an Etheree form

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nina Star

    AMAZING!
    Really good first attempt. i fing them very had to write.
    Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by beautisworthless

    Hey i like this
    though i have feling if you practice you can do alot better with this form f writin.
    i think its fantastic!

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