This poem is good

but it could be great if you structured it right :]

youve got the stanzas going :D

but im just here to help :P

try
"If i could fly like a bird
i would fly so very high.
I would soar through the sky
leaving all my worries behind.

If i could fly like a bird
my face would touch the the clouds
while my feathers hit the ground
as the wind cools me down.

If i could fly like a bird
time would slow me down
giving me time to enjoy the peace
that surronds all around.

If i could fly like a bird
swift as a light
i know for a fact
i would love this graceful flight."

it helps people read it better and flow

its a very light happy poem
and i enjoyed reading it :]