Lyze

by CaptainEmoVenom   Jun 15, 2007


A man once upon a Gin
Announced to the world
That he is tired of lies and Sin
The lies and sin in his life that Swirled

He told the crowd
with no more denies
With a voice ever so Loud
"I don't want to hear any more Lies"

The men of virtue came
Tried to calm him down
We all know they only did it for the Fame
he stood anxiously upon his mound

Rebellious his soul be
he wanted life to be better
Maybe one day he will see
He never should of Met "her"

Once again screaming at the top of his scratched Voice
Tell me no more lies! No more LIES!
This was his ultimate Choice
or else he would just say ..his Goodbyes'

"tell me with honor, Tell me the Truth
Or else my Life i will Forget"
Everyone knew him.. he would do it, Sucidial Ruth
but this was his destined Mind Set

Out of the crowd, Through the oblivious Black
"she" came to the front
An emotion at his point he did oh so lack
This put an end to his everlasting Hunt

He Stated "No more Lies"
She said " I love you"
With a stare in her eyes, he made his last goodbyes
he knew the truth..oh he knew!

Pulled his gun out, Aimed it at his Heart
Loaded the chamber with a nice loud "Click"
In this life, He completed what he thought was his part
The trigger was pulled... he flew back, Quite the kick

He now lays there
Literally broken hearted
his hair is everwhere.
but he finally finished what he started

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  • 17 years ago

    by lovely

    Wow! at the end, did you mean "there"?

  • 17 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Yup this 1 was great 2 ! great imagry !!!i cud c it in my head

  • 17 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Hey, hows it going? I really loved this poem, it had depth and emotion which made me really enjoy it! Well penned, keep the great writting up! 5/5

    Chan
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