by aaaprill Jun 15, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Her thoughts are lost, |
Since you took exception to my last comment on your work, let me just say that THIS is how you should be writing. With passion, and feeling and good use of effective wording. I stand by what I said about your other poem, and you can hopefully take compliment enough that I think of this as a more exacting standard. |
So sad but amazing work! |