Caved In Thanks To You

by marilyn marti   Jun 15, 2007


I will be crying all morning and crying all night
til I hear your voice surrounding me I won't be alright
My heart feels like a rock weighing me down
and I can't find a reason to why I should stick around
I'm lost in the memories and so filled with lies
Could there have been an answer lying in your eyes?
The sheets are so cold, where are you now?
Is there a way to make it, someday or somehow?
Of all the clouds that hover, storms in my sky
Is there a brighter day, can someone tell me why
I don't have the strength to stand, no stength to sleep
I stay awake all night as the monsters talk to me
These walls are my safety from a world so messed up
The only thing I know for sure is that I have given up
There's no sense in living, the sun will never rise
Stuck inside my cave, til I'm swept by the tide
My smiles will diminish, my wounds will grow
Thank you for loving me, then leaving me alone..

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  • 17 years ago

    by reborn

    Ok very good. apart for 2 things. 1 the ending sentence which should be more powerful i u can. n here there is no rime:
    "I don't have the strength to stand, no stength to sleep
    I stay awake all night as the monsters talk to me"
    loved the loneliness described here! u sure are one of my favs!

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Oh my, wow. this one was so into depth and it was very intriguing as well as capturative.
    i felt the pain, and the feeling was not lovely at all.
    i'm sorry for all of the people that get let down like that.
    but i just hope that each and every one of those people can smile and move on.
    even though that's a tough thing to do.
    5/5 love.