by marilyn marti Jun 15, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I will be crying all morning and crying all night |
by reborn
Ok very good. apart for 2 things. 1 the ending sentence which should be more powerful i u can. n here there is no rime: |
by CHOKE
Oh my, wow. this one was so into depth and it was very intriguing as well as capturative. |