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I have found myself asking this questions before. It surprises me so much that you're only 13. You write with such feeling and your words have so much meaning behind them. I can't wait to read more. You have such a great talent. Keep it up hun. Nik

Aww, this was very sad. :( Once again, you have managed to pull off a greater meaning in your poem without over explaining things. Great job! 5/5

Again the why's messed everything up look at my last comment in order to improve this poem

"Leaving you alone forever more"

This line reminded me of the poem "The Raven" by Edgar Allen Poe. But overall i thought it was a great poem, but the last line could have been better, b cuz i know yo ucan write better than that, still a really great write, 4/5

Stephanie NAylor

Thanks i apprecieate your comment....i worked real hard on that poem