Aww sweet poem!!

Thanks i apprecieate your comment....i worked real hard on that poem

"Leaving you alone forever more"

This line reminded me of the poem "The Raven" by Edgar Allen Poe. But overall i thought it was a great poem, but the last line could have been better, b cuz i know yo ucan write better than that, still a really great write, 4/5

Stephanie NAylor

Again the why's messed everything up look at my last comment in order to improve this poem

Aww, this was very sad. :( Once again, you have managed to pull off a greater meaning in your poem without over explaining things. Great job! 5/5

I have found myself asking this questions before. It surprises me so much that you're only 13. You write with such feeling and your words have so much meaning behind them. I can't wait to read more. You have such a great talent. Keep it up hun. Nik