A Lonely Soul

by Julie   Jun 15, 2007


A lonely soul she weeps her eyes show so much sorrow.
The bitter nights are so cold how she wishes for the morrow.

When daylight finally finds her she somehow finds a
way.
To ease the pain within her and make it through the
day.

If you look past her smile you can see her hidden
tears.
But only will she let them fall when the gloom of night
appears.

She's broken and shattered with a heart that just won't
mend.
The silence over whelms her, loneliness her only
friend.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy Miller

    Wow! Very well written...not to mention all the emotions this poem holds. Kepp up the good work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by June

    If you look past her smile you can see her hidden tears.

    That line had so much meaning for me ,for I am hiding behind that smile ,trying so hard to fight back the tears.Very well written well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by reborn

    Sad one. nice emotions well transfered to the reader. what can i say i like ur style. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    It's a good poem, but I feel like I've read it before.

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