When your......

by finally just me   Jun 15, 2007


When your dad walks away
and never once came to stay
and then your told
your better than him
what do you say
when your told
your nothing special
and your treated like sh*t
should you keep going
or just quit
when your heart broken
and your dreams are crushed
should you still try to keep them
or leave them untouched
when you've spent you whole life
crying and alone
should you walk away
from that place you called home
this is my life
what do i do
just give up
or keep staying true????

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  • 17 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    Good poem, it really deals with things that all people feel.

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Never give up xxx good poem well done xxx